ext_113621 ([identity profile] austin-dern.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] austin_dern 2005-08-06 12:57 pm (UTC)

You're right, of course, about a spoiler warning, and I didn't think of it before going to bed or out today. Sorry for that.

I think that in this version Charlie might have stood out a bit better in the factory if he'd made some effort to save any of the other kids from their fate -- being held back by Willie Wonka would be very natural here -- or by recognizing that despite appearances things are set up so the kids can't really be hurt, just turned blue or very thin -- which would also neatly set up his fate in the story.


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